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karahashi ([personal profile] karahashi) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2016-06-15 07:58 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team MIYUKI KAZUYA/SAWAMURA EIJUN, G

This is a really interesting narrative style - each sentence is like a slow, heavy, step, and I think it fits with the pondering feel of the piece :) It definitely brings to mind that supportive walk from the prompt!

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