"That's not what I said and you know it," Chris responds. He bumps his mitt against Miyuki's chest. "Focus on the batter and let me worry about the rest." Give me more Chris-senpai bumping his mitt against Miyuki's chest this is such a nice image A+++
THAT ASIDE. This fic demands attention, like, the words gripped me and wouldn't let go, and each time after I read a sentence I had to go back and reread it, because there's just so much packed into this. Your description of the calls and the mutual decision making was so incredibly perfect for the MiyuChris battery - so controlled and analytical, CATCHER TO CATCHER, even when it's not.
I just want to emphasise how impossible it is to rush through this fic. The way you wrote this - it's just. SO GOOD. IT NEEDS TO BE SAVOURED.
ps your descriptions of miyuki's pitches are so good i mean sure i'm here for the characters and dynamics but also I AM HERE FOR THE SPORT AND THIS IS SOME GREAT BASEBALL RIGHT IN THESE GORGEOUS LINES
Re: FILL: TEAM KURAMOCHI YOUICHI/MIYUKI KAZUYA, G
Give me more Chris-senpai bumping his mitt against Miyuki's chest this is such a nice image A+++
THAT ASIDE. This fic demands attention, like, the words gripped me and wouldn't let go, and each time after I read a sentence I had to go back and reread it, because there's just so much packed into this. Your description of the calls and the mutual decision making was so incredibly perfect for the MiyuChris battery - so controlled and analytical, CATCHER TO CATCHER, even when it's not.
I just want to emphasise how impossible it is to rush through this fic. The way you wrote this - it's just. SO GOOD. IT NEEDS TO BE SAVOURED.
ps your descriptions of miyuki's pitches are so good i mean sure i'm here for the characters and dynamics but also I AM HERE FOR THE SPORT AND THIS IS SOME GREAT BASEBALL RIGHT IN THESE GORGEOUS LINES