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karahashi ([personal profile] karahashi) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2016-06-13 11:27 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team Kuramochi Youichi/Miyuki Kazuya, T

Between this and that other BR1 fill you are going to be completely responsible for me thinking of this ship dynamic in terms of HE STAYED. And just, intimacy in terms of physical support, hnnghadhsdj'klf. I love the bookends with them meeting outside the doctor's, first Miyuki's perspective and then Kuramochi's, and also rather how you had Miyuki's voice going throughout most of it and then brought in Kuramochi there, waiting, understanding all of that at the end. 'he walks beside miyuki out of the clinic, stays close enough to hold him if he needs, hands warm and ready and open at any time.' Your pacing and structure is always so good, like, what a beautiful way to sum up the fic. What a beautiful way to sum up their relationship.

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