Well I mean, you definitely succeeded in getting everything across! This is definitely one of my favourite fills so far, so, yeah, BE PROUD THIS IS A REAL GEM <333
(I ALSO WANT TO ADD that your word choices are fantastic, like, there are way too many examples to pick from, but you can really see you put a ton of care into the construction of your sentences. 'a rare moment of verbal saliency' and the way your words roll into one another - it makes me want to memorise this fit and let's be real I'm already halfway there tbh. This is seriously one of those fics that grows every time I read it - I CAN FEEL THE WORDS RESOUND IN MY HEART THIS IS NOT AN EXAGGERATION.)
((And I'm sorry to hear you were having a rough day!! I hope it's improved at least a little now D:))
Re: FILL: TEAM KURAMOCHI YOUICHI/MIYUKI KAZUYA, G
(I ALSO WANT TO ADD that your word choices are fantastic, like, there are way too many examples to pick from, but you can really see you put a ton of care into the construction of your sentences. 'a rare moment of verbal saliency' and the way your words roll into one another - it makes me want to memorise this fit and let's be real I'm already halfway there tbh. This is seriously one of those fics that grows every time I read it - I CAN FEEL THE WORDS RESOUND IN MY HEART THIS IS NOT AN EXAGGERATION.)
((And I'm sorry to hear you were having a rough day!! I hope it's improved at least a little now D:))