intricacies: (dr: maizono)
★ ([personal profile] intricacies) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2016-06-29 06:20 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team Azumane Asahi/Sawamura Daichi/Sugawara Koushi, T

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I WISH I COULD JUST CAPS THIS ENTIRE COMMENT. THAT WAS HOW I FELT WHEN I FIRST READ THIS. I ALREADY TOLD KAT THIS ON TWITTER, BUT I GOT THE NOTIFICATION FOR THIS WHILE I WAS EATING DINNER AND IT TOOK SO MUCH CONTROL AND STRENGTH NOT TO SCREAM IN THE MIDDLE OF MY SCHOOL'S CANTEEN. I FEEL LIKE YOU WOULDN'T APPRECIATE ME RAMBLE-SCREAMING AT YOU FOREVER THOUGH, SO I'LL DESIST.

This was so, so, so good. I loved this so much; you did so much more than I expected! You blew it way out of the park! Your characterization was spot-on. I loved Sugawara's mischievous nature in contrast to Daichi's more grounded one, and how Asahi's more jittery(?) and nervous, gentler disposition meshes so well with that combo. I was particularly fond of the phone conversations because I felt like your characterization shone spectacularly in those bits. The banter was just? Amazing! My vocabulary is small so please forgive me for repeating compliments, but. I loved their banter so much, between AsaDaiSuga, between the adults and the babies, between EVERYONE.

Hitoka and Chikara are just so precious! I wanna squish them and smush their round lil cheeks and spoil them like Suga spoils Hitoka. My heart can only take so much. I thought they were just so GOSH DARN CUTE and then you had the adults play with them and my /soul/ expired and left my body just a husk on this planet. Goodbye. I left because of the feelios this fill gave me.

Your writing style was also really pleasant to read! It flowed really well and was light enough for the atmosphere of this fill, which is really something I envy because I have such a hard time pulling fluff off, nonetheless one as well done as this.

Thank you so, so, so much for this! This is an absolute gem!! I feel really honored to receive something SO GOOD and I just akdjslkfj how am I even forming words right now. Really, thank you.

(I also hope you feel better soon. ;;)

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