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chromatic_coma ([personal profile] chromatic_coma) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2016-06-29 10:42 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team Azumane Asahi/Sawamura Daichi/Sugawara Koushi, T

I would have appreciated a comment that was all of your ramble-screaming, absolutely. But comment spaces do have a character limit so maybe it's a good thing you held back lol.

The banter was so much fun to write! I definitely was able to cast Daichi and Suga into more specific roles because I figured that the responsibility of having a son would make Daichi a more serious person (especially because, and I failed to mention this in the fic, Chikara is his biological son and the relationship that conceived him obviously doesn't exist anymore, so he is more serious about his relationships in order to ensure stability in Chikara's life as he's getting older and more capable of remembering loved ones.) Meanwhile, Suga technically has "no" children, so while he is just as capable and responsible as a caregiver, he has managed to retain a lot more playfulness and even childishness of his own.

And then Asahi is just genuinely himself, even when it's embarrassing or awkward, and that has a charm of it's own for people like Daichi and Suga who are more composed.

Writing babies is absolutely so so much fun for me, like I said, so Hitoka and Chikara's scenes were some of my favorites. I only regret that I didn't get to showcase the relationship between them? Because I totally envision Chikara having this sense of responsibility over Hitoka and showing her how his toys work, even though the adults say she's too little to know how to play with them the way he does. He is a calm child in general so he doesn't distress her the way some other kids at the library do when she goes to work with her Daddy. They are very much like siblings even if they've only known each other a few months!

Because of that last bit I assume you know I've dropped out of the SASO event for the rest of the summer... that said, I'm really glad that I got to write this before that happened, and that this is the last piece I've written, so that this is the legacy I'm leaving behind. I might potentially revisit this universe because there are lots of stories left to tell (like Hitoka's upcoming birthday!), who knows what the future may bring!

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