OMG I love this. I love how you worked Makoto into it in his endearing way and the way Haruka wants to show off but wants to pretend like he's not showing off. And just the casual nature of the email in general. It's so blunt, so Haruka. And of course, Rin absolutely smitten with Haruka as always.
Re: FILL: Team Matsuoka Rin/Nanase Haruka, G
Thank you!