oh my gosh, this! is so cool! it's really interesting to hear it another voice, to hear the rises and falls, the pauses and emphases. some of it is exactly as i heard it in my own head (especially the super casual, almost laconic way that sousuke is thinking about the fighting on that final day, and also when he's talking to makoto at the end), and some of it brought new nuances to the words. i've listened to it a few times already and will probably listen more. would you be all right with me linking to the audio from ao3?

thank you so much for this delight! :D