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heidi ([personal profile] tripsh) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2016-08-22 05:01 pm (UTC)

FILL: TEAM KURAMOCHI YOUICHI/MIYUKI KAZUYA

Title: kuramiyu inception au
URL: http://sportsanime.dreamwidth.org/13854.html?thread=5546014#cmt5546014
Creator(s): [personal profile] sotongsotong
Rating: G
Major Tags: Inception AU, suicide imagery for the kicks out of dreams, mentions of sleeping drugs and needles
Why is this work awesome?: kuramiyu inception au is like… a dream come true (pun intended)! Serena did such an amazing job with this too. I loved the buildup of everything and their relationship from the beginning to the end. My favorite bit is definitely when Kuramochi goes into Miyuki’s dream. The incorporation of the moment from canon that was the prompt “well, I’ll take him now” (see: me still Yelling about this) was so well done and fit so perfectly. All of the bits about Miyuki’s mom were really great too. And the ending of the fic had such a nice wrap up—good banter, you’re able to feel how they’ve grown closer as time as passed, krmy setting off to get into more trouble together. But I really loved that while it had a concrete and satisfying ending, it left room for more and imagining what could happen next. What are they going to do? Where will they go from here? Really just. In general this was such an amazing fill and krmy and inception au are two very great things, so thank you Serena for gifting the world with this!!

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Title: kuramiyu inception au 2
URL: http://sportsanime.dreamwidth.org/14215.html?thread=6056071#cmt6056071
Creator(s): [personal profile] sotongsotong
Rating: G
Major Tags: slight violence, estranged bonds
Why is this work awesome?: The atmosphere of this was So Much. The entire thing hurts but it hurts so good. The tone and pacing really contributed to the atmosphere too. As I was reading I just really wanted to know what would happen next and what had happened in the past between them that led to this. Everything came off as so bittersweet and my heart hurt.

"It’s too bad we have to pop this bubble so soon, he muses, just the slightest bit bittersweet, when I’ve finally managed to dream of you." This line completely and entirely ruined me. When I got to this point I could feel the bittersweetness of it, and the way Kuramochi approached the entire thing was so well done. In general, I think Kuramochi’s voice here was so good and well-written.

And then, “I probably miss you too” and everything leading up to the end. (“Only in your dreams, Kura.”) made my heart ache so much gosh. I love dying. This killed me. It captured everything I was looking for with the prompt and more because I will always, always be here for kuramiyu inception aus!

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Title: Pied Pauper (kuramiyu poem)
URL: http://sportsanime.dreamwidth.org/15224.html?thread=7289720#cmt7289720
Creator(s): [personal profile] sotongsotong
Rating: G
Major Tags: none
Why is this work awesome?: The imagery in this is so lovely. It’s so achingly beautiful and I love that it kind of builds with each stanza i.e. struggling to come to accept this between them in the first, then in the second falling into it and accepting it. There were so many lines in this that I really loved and really got me, but I especially loved the entire first half of the second stanza. I could feel the emotion behind it. I could imagine it. I think the quiet resignation/acceptance was laced in there so well. Kind of like, I like you so this is how we’ll be. I like you, so let’s keep up what we usually do. I just. Really, really enjoyed this poem and loved the way it was written!

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