Ahhhhh Miaou I love this so much? My favorite thing about it is the subtle layer of character study you worked into this; Miyuki's line about how there's "nothing to win, so there's no point" feels especially on point for him. I love how it was nothing but a game, and now that it's over Miyuki has come for feedback, because he would — I really like the idea of Miyuki valuing Chris' opinion in any context and this is such a different but rewarding version of that.

I also love your dialogue, it has such a nice rhythm and is so in character for both of them, your prose in general is so clean and crisp, nothing wasted, and I find that so pleasing to read.

I love demon-Miyuki cycling through the other possibilities of faces and love seeing more about Chris revealed through that exploration. And I love that this ends with a new game, because of course it does. That, too, is such a Miyuki thing to do.

(also, the blonder, no-glasses Miyuki... I'm not sure if I was supposed to think of a Miyuki-Mei lovechild but I did and it made me smile because it felt like a tiny homage to Ana, I love how kind you are to both of us with your writing, you're so good!!)

Anyway!! Thank you so much for writing for me, I adore this. ♥