saccharinescorpion: (chinatsuakira)
Latia ([personal profile] saccharinescorpion) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2017-06-04 08:43 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team Kanzaki Miki/Miyahara, T

CHESS you knocked this one out of the goddamn park!

I like how you approached the idea of a WKTD AU as less of a direct transplant of the Ballroom gals to Group West and more of a different setting in the same universe (unintentionally or not making this fill a nice compliment to Wes's picture. It makes so much sense that they'd use to phones for this in place of radios. And, of course, I love your concept for each girl's "devil," Shizuku's ending up my fav (beautiful yet empty and consuming)

As always your writing is so poetic and tactile. I really love how you describe even little actions like Chinatsu tieing back Mako's hair or Chinatsu and Shizuku's moment at 4 o clock. And I'm glad you went the route of going through every girl's "ending" before the true end. I don't think I could have asked for anything more. thank you!!!

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