oh gosh i GASPED when i saw it was a poetry fill; i love love love the rhyme and how it manages to capture the ~magic~ sort of feel... the little bit of sadness when makoto knows how dangerous the curse really is, and these lines:
"both his eyes were like the sea
impossibly bright blue
and something there seemed honest
and something there seemed true"
i really really love the ring to them. honestly that's such a terrifying curse for haru, i didn't even think of something that sad, aaa good job!!
thank you so much for this fill!!