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lin ([personal profile] dynamite) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2017-06-20 06:48 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: TEAM PRINCE OF TENNIS, A2, M

takes all your beautiful words and puts them in my mouth!! I love how visceral the imagery is, how soft the leftover unease of feeling in the memories this evokes. the contrast of this is especially felt in "this is there the bullet would go [...]", I love how vivid "my hands over your hands / my mouth on your mouth" is. it's violent, it's soft, it's a beautiful feeling. thank you for such a lovely read.

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