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Fickle ([personal profile] fickle) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2017-06-23 08:04 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team Imaizumi Shunsuke/Kinjou Shingo, A3, T

Ahhh, that’s such an awesome fill! I’m a suck for family conflict so I love that you started it off with Shuusuke thinking about Yuuta’s leaving. The contrast between the ninjas and the Order of St. Rudolph is great (and I love that you called it the Order of St. Rudolph, it’s very Knight Templar!) as is the fact that Fuji did do preliminary investigations! Because he’s such a good brother, really.

other, darker rumors about the tricks he uses to ensure his subordinates' undying loyalty to him

delighted sounds I would read an entire fucking fill about Mizuki mindgaming/fucking Yuuta into obedience, no joke.

Also I love Fuji STILL not rushing and being so calculated about it. Also this bit! “Akashi's destruction is far more thorough than what he could have managed alone”

AHahahaha. DON’T POSTURE AT AN EMPEROR.

Yuuta refusing help and Fuji refusing to have his help be refused is PERFECT, as is Fuji pretending to be surprised he’s chained up as a slave instead of used as a trusted advisor. flailing motions Such a good fill, I can’t wait to read more of this verse!


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