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Fickle ([personal profile] fickle) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2017-06-24 10:58 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team Imaizumi Shunsuke/Kinjou Shingo, C3, T

THE DETAILS OF THE MEANINGS OF TH PIERCINGS ARE SO GOOD. I really like the way you're fleshing out his court and their social signifiers, it's such a great way to build up the world they're in.

Fuji pretending it hurts more than it does is so much YES. Seriuosly flawless characterization. I just. Love it. So very uch. XD

his need to assert control is only satisfied when he can take it by force, or when it's freely given with a sacrifice

Also that line made me suck in a breath because wow. Talk about summarizing Akashi perfectly in one line.

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