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babster ([personal profile] babster) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2017-08-20 09:56 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: TEAM AOYAGI HAJIME/KOGA KIMITAKA/TESHIMA JUNTA - RATING G

ahh this is really cute! thank you! i love kei's sly 'is this the first time a friend invites you over?' and flustering natsuo, but also not making too much of a thing about it. i love kei and natsuo's relationship, and you did a great job portraying how kei wrong-foots natsuo sometimes, and still lets her be herself.

and the cat! the cat is such a great touch, vicious and possessive and a little smug, and of course kei adores her and of course natsuo is jealous. "Maybe I like them that way," she replies !!! so good! i love this! thank you

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