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alphahelix ([personal profile] alphahelix) wrote in [community profile] sportsanime 2015-06-07 08:10 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: TEAM GRANDSTAND [G]

AHHHH I LOVE THIS!!!!!! I HAD TO CLICK OUT OF THE TAB WHEN FUTAKUCHI GOT EMBARRASSED, IT WAS TOO CUTE FOR MY HEART A;SLKFDJFLDJFKDDKKSFDL

Their characterizations are brilliant!!! I love how Futakuchi's phone has a record of all the things he values. I love that you showed him as flippant but caring, because it's easy to dismiss him as a troublesome brat or lose his voice when trying to focus on his more serious side. And your Ennoshita is so perfect!!!!! Idk why but I can totally picture him being up at ungodly hours and perpetually flustering Futakuchi with his mildness. "Ennoshita Chikara, perpetually sleepy-eyed wonder and stealth sassmaster" WHAT A PERFECT DESCRIPTION!!!!!
and "He wonders if a phone camera could properly capture how the light, golden in the way only sunsets can ever be, illuminates the smile on Ennoshita’s face..." THIS PARAGRAPH!!!!! IM SCREAMING INTO MY HANDS AT HOW MUCH FUTAKUCHI LIKES ENNOSHITA!!!! THIS KILLS ME!!!!!!!!!

I'm... I'm so sorry for this mess, you wrote such a wonderful fill and I just... Thank you so much ; A ;

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