Gah, so many feels!!!! I love the prose in this, it's hard to pick a favorite line, but a few of them are: "The room looks relieved. It’s astounding how afraid they all are of Oikawa, Iwaizumi realizes. It would probably make Oikawa happy to know that." AND "It’s all so second-nature for them, like a choreographed dance they’ve done so many times it requires almost no thought." AND " Oikawa was always the best of them all; he was the one who was supposed to shine the brightest. He always had for Iwaizumi, at least." I love how you portray the relationship between the two of them, and the references to their history adds a richness and deepness to it that makes it feel realistic.
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Gah, so many feels!!!! I love the prose in this, it's hard to pick a favorite line, but a few of them are: "The room looks relieved. It’s astounding how afraid they all are of Oikawa, Iwaizumi realizes. It would probably make Oikawa happy to know that." AND "It’s all so second-nature for them, like a choreographed dance they’ve done so many times it requires almost no thought." AND " Oikawa was always the best of them all; he was the one who was supposed to shine the brightest. He always had for Iwaizumi, at least." I love how you portray the relationship between the two of them, and the references to their history adds a richness and deepness to it that makes it feel realistic.