Oh my gosh, this is COOL AS HECK. It's exactly what I wanted out of a prompt like this -- your visuals are amazing, I love the way you've described Makishima, and Tadokoro, and Kinjou especially, my poor heart. Your prose is really distinct stylistically and I love that, and I also really dig your choice to use Onoda as your narrator?

I too can always be swayed by a dapper Kinjou and equally much by a villain Kinjou so this delights me, thank you so much!